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2.01, posted 4th Jul 2017, 7:00 AM, in Chapter 2: Crybaby

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khkddn
4th Jul 2017, 7:00 AM

You might notice the style changes here. For once I spent more than 10 seconds thinking about the color scheme.

Some other things I want to change:
- less copy+pasting, especially for backgrounds
- not every panel is the same camera angle
- better speech bubble placement, so that right away you can tell what order you should be reading things

Whether or not I follow through with all that, we'll see.

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CNightJoy
4th Jul 2017, 11:26 AM

It looks like this chapter is off to a way different start. I like how they are eating fruit snacks in a somewhat creepy location...with glow sticks!


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    khkddn
    4th Jul 2017, 4:25 PM

    Fruit snacks make everything better. I think you will find this chapter a bit ~spooky~


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    TheVoidchildProject
    4th Jul 2017, 12:19 PM

    Omg! You did not just put your charming cast on a nightly outing to spy for ghosts in the woods did you?

    I shouldn't ask, since you probably can't say, but now I'm doing it anyway. Is there going to be stuff incorporated from the old chapter 2 into this new one?

    Also, it's good to have aspirations to change around your art a bit. I do like your old style too though since it had so much charm to it. Thought, that's still evident here obviously. Edith in particular is very striking in that final panel. ^_^


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    khkddn
    4th Jul 2017, 4:28 PM

    The woods are a classic for ghost stories, I couldn't resist :x

    Some things I brought up in the old ch2 will be in this chapter. But hopefully in a way that is better, and more exciting!!


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  • Mutt1718
    4th Jul 2017, 2:07 PM

    I'm so jealous of your art style!! Tbh backgrounds are hard and you made the creepy trees and grassy environment so cool.


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    khkddn
    4th Jul 2017, 4:29 PM

    Thanks, backgrounds are very hard, this page took me a while to do since it established the scenery


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    snuffysam
    4th Jul 2017, 6:18 PM

    "Remember guys, THIS package of colorful things is for wearing. The OTHER package is for eating."

    I do like the way the color pallet looks on this page!


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    khkddn
    4th Jul 2017, 7:03 PM

    It's still tempting, even with the 'do not eat' label on the bag

    thanks :D


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    notkamalayx
    4th Jul 2017, 8:57 PM

    what a calm rave! wait, they're probably looking for ghosts? suuure, do you SEE those glow sticks?


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    khkddn
    4th Jul 2017, 9:01 PM

    Tactical glow sticks

    do you see those grapes, though


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    notkamalayx
    6th Jul 2017, 9:21 PM

    nah, i don't see 'em


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  • Zag
    9th Nov 2017, 10:09 PM

    I really like your comic. ^_^


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    khkddn
    9th Nov 2017, 11:32 PM

    thanks!


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    Chippewa Ghost
    16th Feb 2018, 6:52 PM

    let the binge begin


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    khkddn
    16th Feb 2018, 7:31 PM

    oh lol this explains all those notifications in my updates


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