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Chapter 1 Page 54, posted 29th Mar 2016, 7:23 AM, in Chapter 1: Angry Spirit

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khkddn
29th Mar 2016, 7:23 AM

Ghosts have human forms.

I wonder if the pacing feels rushed here. Was trying to emphasize how abruptly the ghost leaves.

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notkamalayx
29th Mar 2016, 7:42 AM

oh my god theo what a great face


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    khkddn
    29th Mar 2016, 9:24 AM

    what a cool dude


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    TheVoidchildProject
    29th Mar 2016, 12:19 PM

    Theo the hero!


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    khkddn
    29th Mar 2016, 1:01 PM

    Real friends always carry their maybe-possessed friends to safety


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    Shrek
    29th Mar 2016, 1:24 PM

    Okay, I think this is weird. This ghost speaks in contractions with perfect grammar and syntax, but the markings on Edith's face resembled something almost tribal when she was possessed. Wouldn't the ghost care about acting like the time period it was from? And why was she wearing a modern outfit, but confused by dubstep?

    All I hope for is that the green one appears with a pudding cup in hand, and a sheet of paper that says "Pudding killer."


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    khkddn
    29th Mar 2016, 2:42 PM

    Nobody has said anything about the markings, so the only thing we know for sure is they appeared while Edith was possessed.

    Dubstep became a thing in late 90s - early 2000s. There are times before then that have pink dresses, modern english, and a lack of wubwubwub


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    Shrek
    29th Mar 2016, 2:48 PM

    I meant that the dress looks sort of modernized, but I understand your point.


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    CNightJoy
    29th Mar 2016, 3:44 PM

    Cool, so now we know what red ghost looks like. Now the next big question. What is Sadie looking at?


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    khkddn
    29th Mar 2016, 5:35 PM

    if i were her i'd be looking at edith like "is she gonna try to kill us again"


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    CNightJoy
    29th Mar 2016, 5:40 PM

    True! Now will Zander become un-possessed?


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    The Doodler
    5th Sep 2017, 3:30 AM

    I dunno, having a sense of ethics so strong you can reverse-posess a ghost sounds pretty ego-inducing to me.


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    khkddn
    5th Sep 2017, 7:29 AM

    "scared a ghost off with my moral purity, no big deal uheheheh"


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