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Chapter 1 Page 52, posted 22nd Mar 2016, 8:05 AM, in Chapter 1: Angry Spirit

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khkddn
22nd Mar 2016, 8:05 AM

i believe you just identified part of the problem?

there's going to be a second update on thursday btw

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TheVoidchildProject
22nd Mar 2016, 11:20 AM

I prefer this non-creepy form. Nice work on her expression in panel three and the transformative transition in panels 4-7.

Also, extra update this week = woo!


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    khkddn
    23rd Mar 2016, 6:24 PM

    Thanks!! I'm worried about being inconsistent with updates but a schedule's a schedule aha h


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    Shrek
    22nd Mar 2016, 12:00 PM

    wow ok gosty wosty no nede 2 b so agresiv pasiv!!


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    khkddn
    23rd Mar 2016, 6:23 PM

    no. you are wrong. there is a Great Need


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    Shrek
    22nd Mar 2016, 12:00 PM

    wow ok gosty wosty no nede 2 b so agresiv pasiv!!


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    notkamalayx
    22nd Mar 2016, 2:18 PM

    *high fives ghostie*


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    khkddn
    23rd Mar 2016, 6:23 PM

    hey now. whose side are you on.


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    notkamalayx
    23rd Mar 2016, 9:14 PM

    the ghostie had a hand out, I HAD TO


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    CNightJoy
    22nd Mar 2016, 2:22 PM

    Is it time to talk about feelings? :) I like the transition the ghost goes through.


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    khkddn
    23rd Mar 2016, 6:23 PM

    Ways to tell I wrote a story: there's a "talk about our feelings" section every ten pages, and all the characters go through way too many design changes to be practical


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