Chapter 1 Page 43
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Chapter 1 Page 43, posted 2nd Feb 2016, 8:00 AM, in Chapter 1: Angry Spirit

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khkddn
2nd Feb 2016, 9:22 AM

Tooele is a county in Utah. It has notable features.

there's gonna be a second update this week on Thursday because reasons

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CNightJoy
2nd Feb 2016, 3:18 PM

Ooooh more on green ghost. Glad he's stepping up finally. Now about that photo on the mantel...


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    khkddn
    2nd Feb 2016, 8:10 PM

    it felt strange to start making pages where he's suddenly talking instead of, silently staring with a grin, hah


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    notkamalayx
    2nd Feb 2016, 3:52 PM

    ah, tooly.

    seems like zander is now presented with a...choice


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    khkddn
    2nd Feb 2016, 8:05 PM

    Tooele and Hurricane are tied for first place in the Utah Names That Need To Rethink Their Life Decisions contest.

    i can't believe you made me read that pun with my own eyes


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    COUCH
    3rd Feb 2016, 8:22 PM

    Utaaaaahhh! Do you happen to be a utahn too?? Or did you just decide to set your story there? :O


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    khkddn
    3rd Feb 2016, 8:34 PM

    I grew up in Utah! Moved out last summer, though.


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    ranger_brianna_new
    4th Feb 2016, 1:25 AM

    Green ghost guy is just inspiring loads of confidence with a comment like, "can help you stay alive for maybe five minutes".


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    khkddn
    4th Feb 2016, 8:42 AM

    they'd be five minutes of the highest quality! five whole minutes of...a ghost trying to kill him!


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    Nayr
    22nd Mar 2017, 10:16 AM

    Is this the right page? It just sort of jumped to a different setting with dif characters. the older comments indicate this is supposed to be a follow up to the previous page


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    khkddn
    22nd Mar 2017, 1:37 PM

    AAAAAAAokay i fixed it thanks for pointing that out lol

    and thanks for the nice comments on the other pages :)


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