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4.04, posted 2nd Apr 2019, 6:45 AM, in Chapter 4: Handshake

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khkddn
2nd Apr 2019, 6:45 AM

Edith and Theo have become much saltier with each other over time. They disagree about a lot, and Theo got over his crush so he has nothing to lose.

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TheVoidchildProject
2nd Apr 2019, 6:55 AM

Thank god for Sadie, the glue of the group!

Also... “crush”? Maybe I’m dumb or slow or forgetful (or all of the above! ‘^_^)? Was that something that was covered in ch. 1? Is this a subtle and hint that I should go back and do a re-read? Because just like Edith I can be easily dared into stuff too!

Also, love all of the different perspectives you’re trying out these last couple of pages. :)


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    khkddn
    2nd Apr 2019, 7:26 AM

    Sadie's got Theo's back, even if he was being a jerk too.

    Theo used to have a crush on Edith and thought she might like him back, but after realizing she's a crime gremlin- I mean, after listening to Zander, he's over it. It was very short-lived.

    Thanks, it's only been talking in these pages so far, so the perspective stuff has been me trying to keep it interesting.


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    TheVoidchildProject
    2nd Apr 2019, 7:44 AM

    Right! I actually now remember that conversation from ch2 and noted that I, uhm, noted it back then too. Too bad though I can see them having trouble making that work. :P


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    notkamalayx
    2nd Apr 2019, 12:59 PM

    seems like a nap would do this group some good. no fighting, please ;-;


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    khkddn
    2nd Apr 2019, 1:17 PM

    The real fight hasn't even started yet, haha


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    snuffysam
    2nd Apr 2019, 1:32 PM

    The secret fun fact about the gang is that their hair is all based on birds. Theo is the feathers, Edith is the body, Zan is the nest, and Sadie is the... coal? Birds like coal right


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    khkddn
    2nd Apr 2019, 2:50 PM

    ...harsh...


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    CNightJoy
    2nd Apr 2019, 4:50 PM

    Wow is Edith salty. I hope she doesn’t continue to take her frustration out on her friends...could it be amplified by the new ghost friend?


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    khkddn
    2nd Apr 2019, 6:04 PM

    It really isn't like her. she might be stressed out by the bad memories of the place.


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    Werewolfsbane
    5th Apr 2019, 6:26 PM

    Huh, I haven’t thought of Theo’s hair looking like a bird’s before. Now I’m thinking of Theo surrounded by cockatiels, Lol.


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    khkddn
    5th Apr 2019, 6:55 PM

    I almost had Edith say that he looked like a cockatiel instead of just a bird, haha.


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